We were learning about how to paint a picture for the reader.
I found it easy to write down what I saw in the picture .
My buddys name was Danika, she is one of my friends.
I really enjoyed working with A buddy because it was something different.
For this piece of writing we needed to use our kaikorero[ be a communicator]
and mahi tahi. [be a collaborator]
Do you know how to use show not tell in your writing?
We were learning to use show not tell and paint a picture for our reader only using a piece of writing.
To hook in the reader we needed to use language features like adjectives, commas, verbs and onomatopoeia.
Next time I do this I will try to add more writing. I also needed to use whaiwhakaaro[be a thinker] and kaiwhakarite. [self manager]
Me and my buddy did a piece of writing about a koru and
how to add lots off detail in a small piece of writing.
In this piece of writing we needed to use our
Kaiwhakarite [self manager] and Whaiwhakaaro. [be a thinker]
I worked with a buddy and her name was Mia and I
also added her piece of writing so you can see her to.
next time I need to add a bit more detail.
